Kia Ora Kaleb, I can see that you have done lots of research. You have also used firstly to introduce your ideas and have stated what you believe in. Remember, we have to rewrite researched ideas into our own words. This shows what you understand.
Thanks for sharing your opinion, Kaleb. I also love learning about Maori culture through kapahaka.
I wonder how you could put some more of this into your own words? I think your last sentence was the best when you said, "I strongly believe that kapa haka is good for you." That sounded like Kaleb speaking and it is so great to hear from you!
Kia Ora Kaleb, I can see that you have done lots of research. You have also used firstly to introduce your ideas and have stated what you believe in. Remember, we have to rewrite researched ideas into our own words. This shows what you understand.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your opinion, Kaleb. I also love learning about Maori culture through kapahaka.
ReplyDeleteI wonder how you could put some more of this into your own words? I think your last sentence was the best when you said, "I strongly believe that kapa haka is good for you." That sounded like Kaleb speaking and it is so great to hear from you!